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托福考试写作建议及范文

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摘要:托福考试写作考验学生听力和书写能力,所以难度在所有托福考试组成部分之中,也是最难的,需要学生提前熟悉组成部分,当然一定的范文和建议,更可让您的托福考试写作顺手,下面就赶紧随托普仕留学Hanna老师一起看看吧!

  一、托福考试写作建议

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  TOEFL iBT写作部分由两部分组成:综合写作任务、独立写作任务。首先,你有 20 分钟的综合写作时间。完成后,接下来是30分钟的独立写作时间。您将在此处看到两种写作类型和评分规则的详细信息。最后一部分是独立写作的热门话题,链接问题和示例答案。

  第一部分:托福综合写作

  综合写作同时测试您的阅读和听力技巧。您有3分钟的时间阅读学术内容(约 300 字),然后听听相同主题和相似大小的听力材料。你需要总结听力材料的内容,解释与阅读材料的关系。

  托福综合写作建议:

  1、听完后可以摘下耳机。

  2、开始写作前,可以浏览阅读材料,与笔记对比,然后勾勒出你的结构。

  3、你不需要提出你的观点,只需解释阅读和听力材料之间的关系或比较观点。

  4、用完整的英文句子写,表达上偶尔有小错误,只要不影响文章的意思,应该不会影响最终成绩。

  5、记得包含重要信息,你的论文需要满足以下几点:听力材料中的观点、解释和论点;清晰、正确的表达,准确反映听力与阅读材料的关系;注意阅读材料和听力材料要点之间的对应关系;推荐您的文章在150到225字之间;

  第二部分:托福独立写作

  TOEFL iBT 写作的第二个任务是学术论文。作为应试者,您有30分钟的时间来计划、撰写和修改独立试卷。一个有效的回答至少包含300个单词。如果少于300字,它仍然可能被标记为高分。然而,一篇简短的文章通常无法清晰有力地表达您的观点。因此,300 字的长度是获得好成绩的重要因素。

  在此任务中,您写的是一篇典型的小型学术论文,以回答一个问题,该问题要求表达和支持您在特定主题上的理想。它将从三个方面对质量进行评分及建议:

  发展你的想法

  建议:不要使用大的介绍部分或摘要段落来增加字数。提供足够的观点、例子、解释、推理或讨论,你的文章应该达到300,甚至400。

  论文组织

  建议:文章中的要点必须通过逻辑与中心主题联系起来。这篇文章必须形成一个整体来支持你的想法或结论。要获得好成绩,您需要避免句子或段落中的冗余、离题和不清楚的联系。

  语言的质量和准确性

  建议:如果您只使用简单或基本的单词和句子结构,则无法获得高分。你应该尽可能灵活地展示句子结构和精确的词汇。一些拼写或语法错误不会影响分数,但如果错误数量变大,您将大大失去评分。

  2、托福考试写作部分范文

  “Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “It is more important for students to study art and literature than it is to study math and science.” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.”

  There is no shortage of opinion on whether it is better for students to learn art and literature or math and science. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement; I think it is more important for people to study math and science. The following paragraphs will explain my two major reasons for this opinion.

  First of all, science and math are more valuable than art and literature because knowledge of math and science is necessary for understanding and advancing technology. Technology has led this world to become extremely interconnected. The internet, cell phones and airplanes are all technological advances that people use every day and would not be possible without students of math and science inventing them. I heard a story on the news once that illustrates my point quite well. Used plastic is overflowing in landfills and polluting the seas. However, clever scientists have found interesting ways to reuse wasted plastic. In India, they mix thrown out plastic waste with asphalt and use it to pave new roadways. This invention is made possible because of science and math, and it can help solve the pollution problems in the oceans. If students do not continue to learn math and science, then more technologies of the future like this one may never be created. In order to continue making technological advancements, it is better for students to study science and math.

  Secondly, math and science are more important subjects because people need to know them in order to save lives and keep everyone healthy. Doctors, nurses, and medical technicians are all former students of science and math. Drawing from my own experience, my brother recently went to college to become a surgeon. He is going to be studying for eight years, and almost all of his classes will be of these types. For example, he is now learning anatomy, algebra, biology, and geometry which are all science and math courses. When he graduates, he will have the skills to heal patients’ illnesses and injuries because he studies these subjects. For the sake of public health, it is more necessary for students to learn math and science than art and literature.

  In conclusion, I strongly believe it is more important for students to study science and math than it is to learn about literature and art. This is because math and science provide students the knowledge to advance technology, and the ability to cure the sick and dying people in the world.

  2、“Your friend has decided to switch careers but isn’t sure which to choose. What advice would you give them? Provide reasons and examples to support your response.”

  When children are young, they asked by adults what they want to be when they grow up. This, unfortunately, causes kids to think that they can only have one job for the rest of their life. But, in reality, it is perfectly normal for people to want a change. If my friend was thinking about switching her career, but she didn’t know what she wanted to do, I would give her the following two pieces of advice.

  First, if my friend was considering changing her job, I would suggest that she go back to the drawing board. The best career path is one that encompasses three values, each of which everyone gives different weight. The work must allow her to make enough money to live comfortably, it must be something that she is good at, and it must be something that she finds rewarding. For instance, when I was a lawyer, I was good at my job and I earned plenty of money, but I was not proud of the work I was doing. I decided to leave the legal field behind and pursued a job that I could actually enjoy while helping people. That is when I decided to become a teacher instead. In order to determine which new career will be best for her, my friend will need to do some soul-searching first and then look for a job that will include these three ideals.

  Next, if my friend wasn’t sure which new career to choose, but she had a few in mind, I would advise her to job shadow them. As they say, it is best to check the temperature of the water before diving in headfirst. This happened to my aunt when she wanted to quit her job and become a policewoman. Before signing up at the police academy, she job-shadowed. She sat in on some of the classes first, to see if she was interested. She interviewed police officers, to find out if the job would be what she expected, and she rode along with them while they were on duty, to learn what it would be like. Ultimately, she discovered that being a policewoman was not the right fit for her. It was better that she job-shadowed first before making the commitment. This is what I would advise my friend to do too.

  In summary, if my friend was thinking about leaving her career, but didn’t know which one to choose, I would first recommend to her to search for work that best fit her values. Then, I would suggest that she job-shadows any potential jobs she is considering before she makes her choice.

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