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美国大学申请文书如何写?

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摘要:很多学生认为,文书写好就是要英文好,但其实这个并不是最主要的,今天托普仕Alice老师就来给大家讲下美国大学申请文书如何写?

  1.要保证读懂读通,没有语法错误。

  2.写作手法符合美国人的习惯,桥段的呈现把握好节奏。

  3.保证在细节上没有因为国籍,人种不同而产生误解或者认知差异,这就是所谓的三观必须一致。

  这些方面的确需要英文功底,在后面这点的驾驭上,外籍文书老师可能更好一些。 很多孩子喜欢仿写头牌学校,比如哈佛的文书,但是实际上,不同目标校,需要不同的特质,如果仿写,那可能就不是你了。

  我们需要找的不是文书模板,而是学生身上可能被学校喜欢的特质,下面是几种特质对应的文书,大家这样参考,然后对应思考,看自己是否也有类似的特点。

  S: Seizes (自我激励,自我管理) 自我管理,自我激励的能力是非常重要的。如果说,高中生还有老师提醒,大学则很少,或者说基本不会。你必须学会自我管理,招生官喜欢看到学生有自我激励,自我管理的能力。能够独立的把握住各种可能机会。

  参考文章提供者录取了普林斯顿,杜克。

  The movement of each blade illuminated a musical harmony, and each insect scurrying around the grass was an instrument of the orchestra. When it was time to leave, the pleasant music in my head faded into a simple, unpleasant, dissonant noise as I encountered an exhibition on how climate change was destroying thousands of species of grass. That’s when I decided to dedicate my life to saving those special plants.

  The next day, I built myself a garden bed out of wood and plastic that I found leftover in my uncle’s car dealership to begin researching how grasses adapt to challenging thermal scenarios. I read classic books on grass like Charles Veron’s Grasses of the World. I looked at my research from a strictly rational, mathematical and logical perspective. After months of tracking the growth rate of Chloris gayana grass under elevated temperatures, my results reflected my biggest fear: grasses will never be able to evolve that fast.

  P: Pursues (追求) 坚持和追求,不计代价,不怕失败,这是一个优秀的孩子应该有的品质。 参考文章提供者录取了芝加哥,乔治城和布朗。

  A magical portal from the future--though perhaps not so distant in the future as we once thought. In every Star Trek ship, there’s a room with the power to change the world. It’s called the Transporter Room, and it has the ability to teleport people and equipment thousands of miles in an instant. … Meanwhile, new technological advancements are even beginning to resemble the infant phases of a teleporter. In 2017, scientists in China teleported photons 1,400 km from a satellite in orbit, and a team in Switzerland is working on a device which, once completed, may allow quantum teleportation of thousands of atoms at the speed of light through fiber optic cable. Teleportation captured my imagination completely…[...]It wasn’t easy to join the Anderson lab as a high school student. I reached out without any references, and it took weeks to get on the phone with one of the investigators. He was skeptical that I would be able to contribute, but my answers impressed him enough to arrange a second interview. It took four rounds, with hard studying before each interview, but I landed the internship. [...] I am determined to build on my experience at the Anderson lab and make practical teleportation a reality within my lifetime.

  A: Asks 大胆提问,对一些社会现状,一些哲理问题的思考,也是优秀学生应有的品质。

       R: Risks (冒险精神) 冒险精神是一个潜在的成功人士应该具有的品质,这种冒险可以是尝试开一个新的公司,在科研上的创新等等。

  C: Creates (创造力) 创造力是一个优秀的孩子拥有的基本素质。在科技上,组织模式上的创新,都可以归纳为创造力。

  学生可能拥有的特质还有很多种,想了解更欢迎在线咨询~

  以上就是托普仕留学介绍的美国大学申请文书如何写,希望以上内容对同学们有所帮助,如果想去美国留学,想要咨询相关问题,可添加微信:mick5271,或在线咨询~

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